Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Really exciting bio

As we here at a certain unnamed RE company are updating our bios (making them shorter and more "readable"), here is a perfect example of what not to do when writing your bio. i think i fell asleep three times while reading this....
http://townandcountry.hreo.com/html/agent.jsp?type=home&aid=7927

4 comments:

Derf said...

Sort of a cross between an obit. and something for match.com

seven said...

I mean puts the anal in banal.

Anonymous said...

Reads like a third grade biography report.

black fish said...

would make me NOT buy a house...i'd be running for the hills and far away from "the team"